I hope you don't mind if I make a suggestion? There was a lot of information in your review but it was quite hard to read all bunched up together. Reviews that are broken up into smaller paragraphs and have a blank space between them are easier for others to read and it also gives a nice overall look to the review. You can edit your review at any time to change it or to add new information at any time by clicking on the edit link which is top centre of the page as you read your review. Fionaxx
I take it this is a cricket ball we're discussing here.
Some paragraph breaks, more attention to spelling and punctuation would make this review readable, you must have been a terrible disappointment to your English teacher!
